Sometimes, I wonder what will happen if our dreams are already changed into reality and someone raises them from the City of Dreams and brings them to the destination. Haha!! I know that, this is just a wishful thinking.
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I wish someone would be mine, In the enclave of thieves
Who would steal a dream, For me to receive
Picked from the city of divine
Blissful and meant to be mine
Hiding from the moon, By walking slow
He puts that dream, near my pillow
When the first ray of dawn knock on
Then this dream starts blooming on
It’s scent awoke me from slumber
It looks at me and says
“I was waiting for you my dear”.
~Priyamvada
चोरों की बस्ती
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चोरों की बस्ती में कोई अपना मिल जाए
जो सपनों के शहर से एक सपना चुरा लाए।
फिर चाँद की नज़रों से छुपते छुपाते
हौले से उसे मेरे सिरहाने रख जाए।
जब सूरज की पहली किरण मेरी खिड़की पर आए
उसे देख वो सपना फूलों सा खिल जाए।
उसकी भीनी सी खुशबू मुझे नींद से जगाए
मुझे देख वो सपना धीरे से मुस्कुराए।
और मैं शिकायत भरी आँखों से बोलूँ
“नाराज़ हूँ मैं तुमसे इतनी देर से क्यों आए?”.
~ Priyamvada
What you will tell to your dreams, if you get a chance to have a conversation with your unfulfilled desires.
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Wow! Such a beautiful portrayal!
Bahot sundar kavitayein likhi hai aapne.
You are very talented. Keep growing! 💞
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I love looking through a post that can make people think. Also, many thanks for permitting me to comment!
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I like this website very much, Its a very nice office to read and incur information.
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I really like and appreciate your blog post.
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Like!! Really appreciate you sharing this blog post.Really thank you! Keep writing.
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You’re poem is sweet. You’ve inspired me!
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This is beautiful
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Love it
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Beautiful thoughts. I always pray that dreams, good become reality. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Beautiful poem. “Who would steal a dream, For me to receive” – I found this part incredibly romantic.
Wonderful job!
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Greetings! This is amazing!! Enjoyed reading every single bit and look forward to reading more! I was wondering if you could checkout my new piece on a young individual in the community trying to fight all odds to make his dreams come true and hopefully comment some feedback to improve the writing style. Looking forward to hearing from you. – Kiran
https://kiranninprogress.wordpress.com/2019/07/07/the-ar-paisley-live-on-instagram/
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Very pretty. A sweet poem.
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Beautiful . For you …
Let the darkness mellow,
Let the moonlight swallow,
All the trouble,
I swear I would not open my eyes
As you hand them a bubble
Of dream …of fantasy.. of life
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This is haunting
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating. 🙂
With love
RS🌿
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First of all, it’s such a beautiful story and poem. I will tell my dream to wake up where I used to think I’m nothing.
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Thank you so much for reading and encouraging.
With love
RS🌿
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This poem was so simple and deep at the same time.. I had a smile reading it and also it is so beautiful how you write them in 2 languages… I loved the hindi version too(even better i guess😛). Keep doing this. I hope that your thoughts are actually true😁
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Thank you for reading and encouraging.
You loved the hindi version more, may be because hindi is more close to your heart 😉😉
With love
RS🌿
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Touched Your poem
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Thank you so much 🙂
With love
RS🌿
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Beautiful poem Priya..
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Thank you so much Chiru for reading and appreciating.
RS🌿
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Marvelous poem and dreams…
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Thank you for the compliment. 🙂
With love
RS🌿
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How beautifully expressed! 👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you for reading and encouraging 🙂 🙂 🙂
With Love
RS🌿
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Your writings are really nice
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I really like that poem… There are so many ways it/dreams can be interpreted from precious, as this poem is, to not-so-precious, as a nightmare may be. Wonderful imagination!
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Thank you for reading and encouraging. It means a lot. 🙂
RS🌿
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My pleasure!
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This is really pretty. I think it would make a great full length story. I like the idea of someone plucking good dreams from the sky and whispering them to your heart.
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating.
Feeling Blessed🙂
With love, RS🌿
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What a lovely poem! It’s always so nice to have a dream like this 🙂
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Thanks a lot for the compliment. And thanks for reading. 🙂
RS🌿
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Beautiful poem. Dreams can be surprising to some of us. Some of my dreams take me back to past people and events (with some of the facts switched around). Some of a bit strange and unusual, but most are pretty benign and free of harm or sadness.
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts here. Feeling blessed 🙂
RS🌿
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Amazing
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Thanks for reading 🙂
RS🌿
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Hey .. quite impressed with Ur writing..
I m from Dubai (UAE).
Alhamdulillah.. I love the way you recites the helm & Ahlam (dream).
Bettawfeeq habibiti..
Allah Hafiz..
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Thanks a million for this beautiful compliment, Feeling blessed.
RS🌿
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Excellent
Dreams are full of hope
Without hope life is not worth living
Knowing when the dream is fulfilled is key
As without gratitude life is as a vagabond
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Thanks a lot for reading and sharing your thoughts.
With love
RS🌿
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Truely adorable one..
Excellent …
Dream…
May be dream is an imagination. But it also compel us for putting an extra effort To make our life better..
Dream is door to Desire.. Desire embolden us for dedication .. dedication followed by determination .. finally we get what we want….. Dream world…
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating, It means a lot to me dost🙂
With love
RS🌿
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Thank you..
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If I got to have a conversation with my unfulfilled dreams, I would apologize to them for being born in a country where none of them will ever be able to come true. 🤣 Just kidding, your blog is nice, hello from Caracas, Venezuela.
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Hey! A big thanks for reading and commenting though.😀
Feeling Blessed.
RS🌿
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Very touching. Keep writing…Amazing lines
Below lines are dedicated to you :
फिर वो सपना मेरी आँखो में देखा और बोला,
कमबख़्त सूरज ने ही आने में देर कर दी वरना मैं तो कब से खडा़ था आपके दीदार को!!
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Thanks a million for the dedication, You are love 💟
RS🌿
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You are such an amazing writer 💮
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Thanks for reading, It means a lot. RS🌿
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Nice
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Thanks. RS🌿
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Mesmerizing
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Thanks for reading and appreciating.
RS🌿
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This is beautiful.
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Thank you for reading and appreciating.🙂
RS🌿
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